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四级作文： The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured)
During the SARS period in this spring, the year of 2003, one of my classmates, li ming, was struck down by the virus and was immediately sent to hospital.
The news spreaded quickly on campus. At first, we were terrified and wondered if we were infected too. However, through our government's publicity on mass media, we gradually conquered the fear and set out to try our best to help her. Some teachers provided daily necessities while some students recorded the english class contents for him so that li ming could not be left behind. With our care and concern, li ming recovered quickly.
Such an incident teaches us a good moral. Our society is full of love, warm and peaceful, in which people-from man to woman, from individual to individual-lend others a hand. Just like a famous song goes, "the world will turn into heaven only if everyone contributes a little." and I do believe that it's my great honor to live in this love-filled paradise!
东方教育在线点评：本文切题，论证丰富生动，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无大的语言错误，仅有个别小错误。
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六级作文：图表作文
It can be discerned that the American students prefer to read the popular novel rather than other kind of books, such as the unpopular novel, the books of technology, poem and so on. The percentage of the popular novel is about 68.2% currently. Other kind of novels' currently is, relatively, about 16.8%, 8.3%, and 5.2%.
It is not hard to think out why the popular novels can attract so many students. The popular novel is interesting, and not so abstract as books that full of the mathematic formulae. However, as university students, study is the first task for us to do. So we should pay more attention to the books about our major. Fictions may colour our life, but it can not be the key part of our studying life.
Personally, I would like to spend my free time in reading books about my major, such as technology digests, computer newspaper... Because I want to do a good job in my subjects. Fortunatly, my dreams come true, meanwhile, I 've gained other things-I've founded a solid basic knowlege about my major--make me feel easy to contrive the electronic circuit which have to be done during our bachelor years. Thanks to those books
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东方教育在线点评：本文切题，论证比较有力，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，但有个别语言错误。
打分：14分
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